With its mix of scientific
observation and metaphysical questioning, Jim Johnstone’s latest poetry
collection, Dog Ear, recalls similar procedures in the poetry of Leigh
Kotsilidis. Whereas Kotsilidis accepts the incompletions inherent in fact and
fancy, equably so, Johnstone’s speculative conclusions are anguished, the
product of a mind obsessive enough to follow the circuitous and repetitive
paths of logic, but intelligent enough to know its not likely to offer more
than provisional understanding. The titular opener displays this frustrated
investigation:
It was years before I learned to call
this prayer: the right-hand corner
of a page turned down to make another
page. I attempted to escape, then return
to the boneyard where I’d removed
an earring from my wife’s right ear—
diamond, the crux of the universe,
contracting to leave a pin-sized hole
midair. In that margin, my words
remain transfixed until she disappears—
proof that while I swore the world
I’d created would double like a hand
beneath my own, it merely stretches
before me in consolation. There, there.
this prayer: the right-hand corner
of a page turned down to make another
page. I attempted to escape, then return
to the boneyard where I’d removed
an earring from my wife’s right ear—
diamond, the crux of the universe,
contracting to leave a pin-sized hole
midair. In that margin, my words
remain transfixed until she disappears—
proof that while I swore the world
I’d created would double like a hand
beneath my own, it merely stretches
before me in consolation. There, there.
“Dog Ear” also
demonstrates Johnstone’s – I want to call it ‘facility’, but that’s not the
right word – strange blend of anecdote, metaphor, and fantasy. In isolation,
those components don’t provide a vehicle for even provisional understanding,
but a readerly juggling act conjures an
organic unfolding, climax, and denouement, classic structures that, in
Johnstone’s effort, muddies and perplexes, while closing on an anti-epiphany,
the final two-word repetition either compassionate or maliciously diverting.
The metaphysical
questing is a constant throughout the collection, and an obsessive trope that
supports it is flying/falling. In “Complementarity” (“All that’s lost is given
shape -- /a hand crushed under Boeing/fuselage”), in “Inland” (“our company’s
shade/lifts likeness from stands of birch, blots/retreating lanes of wind: our
pilot”), in “Evel Knievel Negotiates the Fountain at Caesar’s Palace” (I groped
around and found myself/unmoored at latitude”), and in “Ariadne’s Thread” (“Our
pact: to climb against winter’s rush
--/mad, uncoupled”), the narrator is caught in a tragic fix: wise enough to
know of gravity’s inviolable law, but restless enough to want to transcend it
anyway, however knowingly futile the attempt. In this, Johnstone’s dilemma
(acceptance of entropy vs spiritual
desire for transcendence mated with its infinitesimally small likelihood of realization) can only be recorded and
aesthetically investigated, if not unified.
The biggest weakness
of this volume is Johnstone’s over-reliance on the high-toned, even vatic,
register. The poems are good enough – and some of them are more than good – so that the tone doesn’t create an unfortunate
parody of itself, and I also realize that existential burrowing isn’t an avocation, but an occasional self-puncturing
(“Evel Knievel” ’s “body tossed ass-first/over the gas tank’s hive” a stick-out
exception) would be more than welcome.
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